Im so happy with ur comments…so lets see what haopens now….and plz one thing dont bash me after reading this part…its a request..and im sad that some are blackmiling me for something by saying that they wont read my ff anymore…bt I dont care for them….
Previous part:
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Laksh calls someone
Laksh:sumi maa…its me lucky
Sumi:what happen lucky…is shona okk..she havt even called me after reaching there…beta.only because im trustinh u people, I said shona far away…
Laksh:haa maa..I knw..everything is kk..I just called to inform u that shona is kk
Laksh hangs the phone and breaks down…
Laksh:why god…because of us shona left us…now what will I say to sumi maa…
Ragini passifies laksh
Ragini:lucky plz
Laksh:just shut up ragini…dont dare call me lucky..its only for my shona…if sanskar didn’t came here..I would have killed u
Ragini (shocked):it means
Laksh:its only because of sanskar blackmiled , I tolerated u and bashed my shona…we have hurted her a lot..
Ragini:it means u dont love u
Laksh:I would have loved u…because my shona wished to see us together…did u noticed tbat whenever u came near me, shona would move away frm me, u think that she dont like u..bt the fact was that? She gave us some privavy….bt what u did…u joined with that blo*dy don and make my shona away frm us
Ragini:laksh..plz..I dont this…actually he blackmailed even me…
Laksh:u knw ragini, because of him..I lost my dearest frnd..he killed my frnd that too in front of my eyes..bt I was helpless…and now same happens…
Ragini:nothing will happen to swara…dont worry laksh….
Laksh storms into cabin.
Laksh:(folds his hand) plz…I knw u must knw wherr my shona is..plz…give her back to us
Sanskar:just chill laksh..I knw u all LOVE swara..no no ur shona…ryt
Laksh:sanskar plz…we love swara…bt its not as u think…I just love her as a frnd…we we born on same day and we grown up under same roof…plz sanskar dont punish her
Sanskar:laksh….if I got to knw that u loved my swara, I would have already killed u…bt no laksh…I love her..and I need her as my wife…
Laksh:bt the things that u do here doesnt mean that u truly loved her…u r forcing her to love u sanskar
Sanskar:yes im…because im mad of her..im really crazy seeing her…after marrying me she could really fall for me…I will give all luxurious life…money and evwn people will be scared of her…
Laksh:do u think she love it…no sanskar…she just hate these life..she always prefer simple life…
Sanskar:look laksh…don’t break my patience….I hear what u said now..bt I heard this only because swara was ur frnd…bt not anymore….she hates u all….now my route is clear….I will get her
Sanskar starts to laugh like a insane
Laksh:I will find out myself…and one more thing…shona will never hate us….she is sure that because of u we did so…and she will be hating u even more for breaking friendship
Sanskar holds laksh hand and point gun towardd his forehead
Sanskar:if u utter a word..I will shoot u…
Laksh:kill me..I dont care….bt im happy that shona will never love u as u killed her frnd..
Sanskar load the gun…and was about to pull the trigger
Just then
Ragini comes storming
Ragini:LAKSHHHH
Sanlak turns
Ragini:body…dead body…..sh….shonaaa….
Just then ragini faints
Both sanlak rushes towards ragini….
Laksh lifts her up and runs to the medical room….and then to the area where there is a crowd….
Laksh goes towards them….
He was continuously praying to god….
Laksh:plz…god help me…I need my shona back..my bubbly shona..who loves to irritate me lot…
The body was of a girl…her, it was delayed and even face was not clear….
Laksh calls in swara no. Unfortunately it ran frm the deadbody which shocks everyone. .
All cries…and start to blame each other for her state….bt sanskar was just smiling
Laksh:are u insane sanskar
Sanskar:it u people..how can u think that it’s swara….she left the college just now..and see this body seema to decayed…just use ur common sense laksh…
All felt releived…police takes the body away..
Just then they see swara coming back to college
Laksh sees her and hugs her……
Laksh:where were u idiot…how can u say u will leave me….
Sanskar sees this and gets angry…
He calls someone and tells something….
Swara sees sanskar and looks at him angrily…
After sometime
Its late night swara have fully drenched in rain so she takes shelter under a bus waiting shelter….
Some pairs of eyes were looking at her lustly…
One of them come forward bt swara didnt find him…he was about to touch her…bt..
She hears a bullet sound and turns back to find one man lying on floor with bullet on his head..rest of them gets scared and moves aways
Swara looks at him in fear…she looks around and finds sanskar holding a gun…
Even sanskar was looking at her with desired eyes….
Swara was fully wet and even her each body curves are clearly visible….
Sanskar comes forward..
Swara:sa…sanskar…(shivering due to rain and fear)
Sanskar:(shouting) who told u to go out at this time…dont u have any sense….what would have happen if I didn’t come
Swara:this man would have not lost his soul…he would have lived
Sanskar:wow…mother teresa…..then what about u…..
Swara:nothinh much..maybe I would have raped by them…thats it
By hearing that word….sanskar slaps swara hard on her cheeks
She fall down due to that…
Sanskar gets her up by pulling her arms
Swara:leave me sanskar…..
Sanskar:hiw dare u to speak like this…u said that they would have raped u naa…now I will show u what will it ferls when someone rape u…
Saying sanskar drags swara and pulls her in car….
They reached a farmhouse….
Swara was continuesly pleading him to leave her bt all gone in vain..
Sanakar:just shut up…I have asked u to marry u..bt u rejected my proposal…niw its ur time to repent….
Sanskar pulls her on bed and goes near her and removes her dupatta which was covering her chest
Swara pulls him and start to run bt sanskar grabed her hands and pulls her more closer…
Swara:dont do this…plz……what u do is wrong…what if it happens with ur sister…
Hearing that sanskar leaves swara…
He sighs her to go…first she was confused bt later she moves frm there leaving sanskar alone….
She reaches her home…
Sumi:where were u shona….what happened..where is ur shawl..
Swara:(covers) maa…nothinh to worry…it was raining naa and maybe in that shawl might fly somewhere
Sumi:is that a bird to fly
Swara:maaa
Sumi laughs…
Later after having her lunch she goes to her room….
swara:what happen to him, when I said about sister…..I can see some pain in his eyes…plz god help me….
Next day..
It was a weekend…so all swara frnd was there in her house….
Sumi:who is this new girl….shona..I havnt seen any girl with u naa
Swara:maa..she is ragini….
(I knw u all dont like ragini being negative so I made her positive..after hearing about swara, she realises her mistake)
Sumi:so u r ragini…I heard that some ragini has stoled my sons heart
Looking at laksh
Laksh:maaa
Sumi:what happened…I dint even says that it was u…bt u only figurr it out that it was u…
Laksh:its not fair maa..
All laughs…
Just then a man of 50 enters…
Swara saw him
Swara:papa…..
She goes and hugs him
Swara:I missed u dad…
Shekar looks at laksh and sighs some thing and laksh shows thumps up
Shekar:who are u…
swara:papa..
Shekar:some one said that…”(imitating swara)I dont want papa..he is busy with his work…so laksh u take my papa..I will take ur papa..so let us enjoy”
Swara looks angrily at Shekar. ..
Just then ankush comes inside…
Swara hugs him
Swara:I have my papa..
Laksh hugs shekar
Laksh:I have my papa..
Shekar:ankush jii..did u knw that our pyary children have exchanged their fathers….
Ankush:haa shekar jii…bt I knew…u take laksh..I want my daughter swara….she is at least usefull to clean the house…..
Swara:papa (pout)
Laksh teases her
Shekar:dont worry jii..I have laksh…even he is usefull so that my car can be washed daily and he will go to fish market daily
Laksh:WHAT…..
Swalak thinks something
Just then sumi comes
Swalak runs to her
Swalak:we dont want u…we need maa
All laughs at their words
Ragini:(thinks) what I did……how happy they are with each other..how can I think that they love each other…tbey are bounded by love, frndship love
Sumi:bt I need ragini…
Ragini have tears in eyes (she doent have mom)
Laksh:stop loving ur future daughter in.. (realises what he said)
I mean
Swara:in law….see maa…before marrige only he made ragini ur daughter In law
Raglak feels embaraced…..
Sumi:shekar jii ankush jii, after their completion of study I should get them married…talk to raj jii
Ragini smiles
Sumi:wont u hug ur maa
Ragini hugs sumi…
Then she goes to swara
Ragini:swara…because of u I got a maa and see laksh
Swara:im angry with u ragini…u r calling me swara instead of shona…its not fair..
Ragini:haa mere shona..
Both hugs…
Swaragini plays
Precap:sanskar back…swara enters in business field to help her dad…a shock to swara
27 Comments
Nice
ammazing
Awesome ??? already waiting 4 next part
Nice…..
awesome……update soon
nyc
Mind blowing…… It was such a good part…… Why would we bash you? If you can try to update today only……..
thanks for long upadate
thaks for making ragini positive….and this part was awesome
Awesome. U r rocking it
make the marriage track soon
why are u not uploading ur hatred to love
amazing…keep updating every day….at leat twice episode
add more swasan scenes….I must say, u have some special creative mode in swasan scene
marwoless. .splendid…no words to say…. and thanks for making ragini positive…..if u can add raglak scenes always
u proved thay, every person have the ryt to love..and thanks for tbat
Awesome dear
nice
Thanks for making ragini positive
awesome…..dont worry about the bashers saluz…..its awesome dr…..
plz update hatred to love
Awesome
Superb
Amazing waiting for next update asap……
whats that shock…cant wait
Next part ..i am waiting