Hii friends sorry kept u all waiting actually I wanted to make last epi a perfect one n so was composing it I hope u all will like it
so today my one more spl journey is coming to an end to start with thank u list
Dear
Jasmine Rahul thanks alot dear for all ur long comments dear parichary thanks dear for ur comments n predictions regarding next part Lisa dear thanks alot n yes I would comeback with another ff Nivedha,neethu thanks dears veronica, kumud,
reshma,radhikaji akshata, ipsita,
, guru kv, sowmy,
janini thanks am sorry if am
forgetting somebody sorry
every comment meant alot so
thanks a tonne
n my dear silent readers
thanks for ur silent support
So here it goes
5 YEARS LATTER
Raman is talking on cell a small baby (around two years ) comes crawling near him she holds his trouser
Raman smiles he lifts her n kisses her baby starts crying
Raman(tensed)-Ruhi beta what happened ok please dnt cry I will take u to mumma
Ishita is getting ready she applies sindoor a small baby (around two years) comes crawling n holds her sari Ishita lifts her n kisses her baby starts crying
Ishita-ohhh pihu dnt cry wait bachaa I will take u to papa
Raman goes to Ishita with baby n ishita to Raman
they smile seeing eachother
Raman-ishu take ur ruhi n make her quiet n give me my pihu
They exchange babies n babies smile
Ishita-Raman our daughters r naughty like us
(wink wink yes they r married n blessed with twins ruhi n pihu )
Raman-ishu lets leave now we r already late,mummy papa we r ready
Toshi smiles seeing ishra with daughters mr Bhalla plays with kids
Party Hall
Abhishek welcomes Bhalla family Amma n Appa hug Ishita
Raman-Now mr Abhishek u look perfect (Raman winks)-How was ur suhaagrat bro
Ishita-Raman(She gives him angry look)
Abhi-I will tell u in detail but first let romi, Ashok n Mihir come
Ishita-where is supriya
A beautiful newly wed bride enters in pink sari (she is mona Singh)
Abhi goes to her kisses her hand
Abhi-so here comes my beautiful wife Mrs Supriya Abhishek Iyer
supriya blushes Ishita hugs her
(Abhi is married to supriya )
Ruhi n pihu r playing with balloons A small baby boy comes n kisses Ruhi n then pihu
All look at kids adoringly
Romi n shagun walk hand in hand
Romi-Raman our son is flirting with ur both daughters be careful
shagun smiles Ishita hugs her
(shocked friends shagun n romi r married n that child is their son)
Rinki enters with a small child in lap n Ashok besides her
Rinki-No bhai when my adi will grow up he will flirt more
Ashok-After all he is my son
Romi hugs Ashok n shagun takes Rinki’s baby in lap
(second shock friends Rinki n Ashok r married n have a son too n Romi hugged Ashok keep reading)
Abhi n supriya welcome everybody
supriya-where is my lovely sis in law mihika
mihika enters
mihika-sorry bhabhi actually
Mihir-bhabhi before she lies she as usual took time to get ready
Abhi hugs Mihir n supriya hugs mihika
(third shock what is mihika doing with Mihir what about simmi keep reading friends)
All r sitting on Table
Abhi-Today’s day is so special for all of us 5 years ago
*******Flashback**************
Auditorium
Rithvik (host of dance championship)-N guys hold ur breath winner of dance championship is………
Rsim members r holding hands
ishra have painful eye contact
Rithvik-somebody who made us fall in love with them by showing their love yes it is Rsim from India
Raman sits on floor Ishita hugs him Romi, Mihir n Simmi hug
Abhi, appa amma mihika smile
Remo gives trophy to Raman tears well up in his eyes
mr Bhalla n Toshi stand up
Raman-I I I I cannot believe am holding this trophy something I dreamt of from day I actually started to see dreams but I never knew that my dream will make me so self centred so rigid that I will end up hurting someone who means world to me some one without whom I cannot survive, some one who is my love I dnt think saying sorry would be enough but still (Raman sits on his knees ) Ishita am sorry very sorry (he weeps) I love u Ishita
Ishita runs towards stage she hugs him
Ishita-Raman I love u too
they cry hugging eachother
All clap
Ahhh haan pyaar kar ohhooo pyaar kar la la pyaar kar plays
Shagun is crying inconsolably Romi notices he goes near her
Romi(gently)-shagun what happened
shagun (tear eyed) Am bad very bad I did it all I provoked Abhi lied to him that Raman loves me I took him to Ashok I made this plan but I never get Raman’s love I cannot get anybody’s love nobody can love me am so bad
Romi hugs her
Romi-I love u shagun from day I saw u for first time
shagun is dumb struck
Romi(tear eyed)-I made out that u loved Raman alot so I decided to go away far away from u I kept fighting kept finding fault with u n tried to overcome my feelings but I lost I still love u love u
they hug each other
Rsim members r celebrating Rinki walks hand in hand with Ashok
Romi gets angry n shagun places her hand over his
Ashok-Raman am sorry extremely sorry I should nt have done this u r real champ Romi please please forgive me trust me I was a play boy used to flirt alot but after I met rinki I I I only love her please Romi for Rinki’s happiness accept us please
Rinki folds her hands Romi hugs Ashok n Rinki
******Flashback ends**********
Supriya-Abhishek this sounded like story of film u never proposed me like that like Raman proposed Ishita
Abhi-Madam forgot I proposed u on Canada airport
supriya smiles n hugs him
Mihir is tear eyed mihika places her hand over his
Raman-Mihir we too miss Simmi alot
*****Flashback*********
simmi is shown shopping happily suddenly a bomb blast is shown
Hospital
Mihir is crying simmi is badly injured
simmi (unable to breathe )-Mihir Mihir pro pro promise me u will marry again pro pro
Mihir tries to nod
Simmi closes her eyes
*****Flashback ends*****
Mihika places hand over stomach
Mihika-we r going to keep our would be baby’s name Simmi
Mihir smiles
Raman whispers in Ishita’ s ears-u r sister is devi like u
he kisses ishita’s cheeks Ishita blushes
pyaar kar is played all couples dance kids too dance (junior Rsim;;) ) n elders smile
N needless to say They lived Happily everafter
So how was it?
How was this ff criticism most welcome
friends any suggestions
waiting eagerly for ur comments would miss u all alot
sorry for any mistakes done
thank you
Tata bye bye ♥♥♥♥
16 Comments
Nice
I will miss this ff
Nice end dear and waiting for u next ff. Happy that all got a pair……??
Very nice ending….. I hope u will come with ur next ff and eagerly waiting….
5 yrs leap was unexpected.Ishra married n have twins.1st ff where pihu n ruhi r twins.Ruhi pihu as twins is perfect.Ashok turned positive n he rly loved rinky n apologized too.that was so nice.all couples r married n have kids too.so cute.Abhishek marrying supriya who is mona was a total surprise.Their luv scene was sweet.Romi Shagun as a pair was surprising.But they made d perfect pair.Bcz in all luv stories.the ppl who fight fall in luv later n in this ff its romi n shagun who always fought 2gether.Romi cnfessing his luv 2 shagun was d best part of this update.dialogues o Romi shagun was beautifully written.Raman’s team won n Ishra union on stage was beautiful.loved it a lot.but d shock was simi’s death n MiMi marr.Simi Mihir last scene was very painful.They r going 2 name their baby Simi.I am rly upset with simi’s death.Wish u had’nt killed Simi.I loved her n mihir Simi jodi in this ff.Wish Mihika had married someone else n mihir Simi lived happily.The ending with pyar kar dance was superb.
Come back with nice ffs.And plz consider my request 2 write a FF on KKHH with YHM cast.
By the way i’ve started a new ff Pyar ka meetha intezaar with Abhigya,Rosid,Ishreet,RanJan n Sujak Kashish.
Offoooooo It’s AWESOMEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
Too good Rushi dear!! I was totally amazed by how u made everybody’s life settle in a happy way.. That too Mihir&Mihika pairing was unexpected! I loved each of your episodes from the depth of my heart! U r indeed blessed with such marvelous writing skills..Will miss u for sure! Do come back on this site with yet another ff..
Loved it yaar…..loved it ….I just loved it….one by one u gave sooooooo many shocks…..plz come back soon….with ishra ff only….plzzzzzz….love u…..I will miss u and kr ff
just loved it yaar .pls come back soon …………………. all the best
Will miss ur ff yaar….pls come back soon with your new ff….
It was awesome dr…
Simmis death s shocking…Feeling sad for mihir…
But I am happy that mihir and mihika got married??
Shagun and Romi’s patch up is nice?
All on a sudden everyone realized their mistake a dr??????
But it was nice??
Ishra was cute???
Totally it was nice dr???
Please continue I am gonna miss this ff attest start a new ff. Love the way u write u r the writer whom I adore love this ff sorry for not commenting I love it
nisha, shalu, Elinor so so sorry forgot to mention ur names in my thanks list sorry n thank u vry much
nisa thanks dear
shalu thanks alot dear
jasmine Rahul dear thanks sorry for simmi’s track wanted to spice up story yes dear am considering to write ff on kkhh thanks a tonne for suggestion
guru thank u very much
kv missed u a lot thanks
parichary thanks alot dear
ipsita thanks alot dear
lisa dear thank u very much sowmy thanks dear
neethu ty ty ty so much dear
Reshma thanks alot dear
would miss u all lots
It is sp beautiful story and glad to have happily ending story.
Sadly that Simmi had lost her life and ask Mihir to promise that Mihir should remarried. Mihir still love Simmi but accepted Mihika as his wife but happily that Mihika will name her unknown gender as Simmi.