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Recap-In last epi we saw eagles performed all steps which were composed by rsim, rinki betrayed them n gave their steps to eagles Raman in anger blames Ishita n calls her outsider who will never understand efforts taken by rsim he also accuses Ishita to be part of Ashok’s plan
Ishita is sobbing n unable to believe that Raman is blaming her
simmi pacifies Ishita
Raman too breaks down
Raman-All is finished, dreams r completely broken Rsim will lose n we will get disqualified no body will ever let us perform
Ishita tries to touch him
Raman (yells)-Ishita please leave go go go go the more I see u I get more angry n upset goooo
Ishita leaves with tears in eyes
simmi goes behind her
simmi-Ishita please please dnt mind whatever Raman said was in anger
Ishita (trying to control her tears)-He feels am with Ashok, he feels he did mistake by making me part of Rsim, he feels am outsider, All is ok I didn’t mind but he feels I will break his dream I cannot do that didn’t he realize his dreams r mine now it matters to me most how will I
(Ishita cries inconsolably
simmi tries to pacify)
but simmi what makes me more disturbed is Raman’s agony n he doesn’t want me to be around I cannot see him this way …..He is punishing himself
Raman is walking on dark empty streets with wine bottle his eyes r red he is continuously drinking
he is about to trip somebody holds him n takes him in her arms
yes it is shagun
shagun (concerned)-Raman Raman sit here what r u doing have u gone mad give me this bottle
(she snatches his bottle n throws it far away )
Raman (angry)-y did u do this?
shagun-Raman u r drunk enough I cannot let u harm urself so
Raman looks in her eyes
in inebriated state he feels its Ishita
he hugs her
shagun smiles
Raman-u always care for me
Iyer house
Ishita is sitting in garden
Abhi notices he goes n sits next to her Ishita is lost in thoughts her eyes r full of tears
Abhi places his hand over hers
Abhi (lovingly )-ishu
she hugs him n cries
Abhi is taken back
******Flashback*********
ishra r dancing they r lost in eachothers eyes shagun looks on n feels envy she leaves she sees
Abhi looking at ishra
shagun-Hii u r Abhishek Iyer right?
Abhi (confused)-yes but how do u know me
shagun-Hi am shagun Ishita replaced me in Rsim
Abhi-ohhhhh I was just…
shagun-I understand ur pain u love Ishita alot its visible in ur eyes actually Raman n I love eachother
Abhi (dumbstruck)-what? ?
shagun-yes he just wanted to get good chemistry with Ishita so he is playing with her feelings, all Raman wants is to win trophy but I feel bad for Ishita, I feel she should see Raman’s real face I want Ishita to get away from Raman (tears well up in her eyes).Abhishek Raman is flirt he doesn’t understand emotions of girl he has played with mine n now Ishita’ s please save her please
Abhi (confused)-but how I mean Ishita
shagun-I will help u I have plan as it is I want to take revenge from Raman he has ruined my life
Abhi n shagun r in a big hall Ashok comes
Ashok-so tell me what u wanted to talk
Shagun-I have deal for u?
Ashok-what deal??
shagun-deal that would help u win dance championship trophy
All u have got to do is send rinki to Rsim
Ashok-r u mad?
shagun tells him something, Ashok nods shagun keeps saying Abhi looks on
Ashok (with wicked smile)-sounds good but will Ishita take Rinki’s side
shagun-definitely Ishita is very kind she will melt with Rinki’s tears
shagun n Ashok shake hands
Ashok leaves
shagun-Raman will go mad with anger when he will make out that Rinki betrayed them he will blame Ishita n Ishita will see his real face
Abhi-But Ishita her dream her efforts
shagun (with tears in eyes)-her dream will break but her life it will get saved look at me do u want to see ur Ishita like this. A little pain will save her from lots of pain n u r there to take care of her she will be fine n u just take her away from here
Abhi gets thinking
shagun has wicked smile
shagun’s pov-Raman will blame Ishita, Abhi will take a broken Ishita away, Raman will get more hurt n I will replace Ishita n make Raman forget her Raman is only mine
So frnds how was twist ??
8 Comments
Nice twist. But don’t separate Ishra.
where were u?I missed ur ff very much.
what a twist!As i doubted it was shagun who betrayed them.i had a doubt as she smirked in d last epi.But i never thought that shagun involved abhishek also into it.she fooled abhi that raman was her lover n 4 his benefit he is playing with ishita’s feelings.inorder to save ishita from betrayal Abhi supported Shagun in her evil deed.Its shagun who made ashok n rinky do this.it was shocking.never expected shagun to stoop so low.In the movie Karishma was’nt so wicked like Shagun.I hope shagun’s plan will b flopped.plz expose Shagun soon.plz unite ishra.i want raman to apologize 2 Ishita n console her
Nice..but hate this shagun don’t separate ishra
I knew it that would happen!
Romi, Simmi and Mihir refused to do the dance without Ishu.
Raman get confused and ask what is going on.
Romi, Simmi and Mihir that they are quitting the team if Raman don’t bring Ishu back.
Raman will go to Ishu house to ask Ishu to return the team and Abhi get angry and stop Raman and tell Raman to stop ruin Ishu life and Shagun is your gf and Ishu will no longer part of your them and I am sending Ishu to Ashok. Raman and Ishu get shocked. ishu cried and ran away. Raman ask Abhi how told you that Shagun is my gf. Shagun is not my life. Ishu is my life and I love her. I will not letting Ishu join with that Ashok.
Raman goes to Ishu and plead with her and Ishu refused and tell him what he had told her that she is an outsider and part of Ashok plan. Raman feel guilty and apologies. Ishu refused and throw Raman out of her house. Raman feel helpless and goes to Abhi and explain. Abhi get confused and tell Raman about Shagun. Raman get shocked and get angry. Raman then goes to RSIM to wait for Shagun. RSIM team wait for Ishu to come but Raman give information about it and Romi, Mihir and Simmi get shock and Shagun smirk then Raman blamed on Shagun and kick Shagun out of RISM. RISM without Raman goes to Ishu house and beg Ishu to come back. Romi give idea to get new dance. Ishu agree. Ishu comes to practice hall and Raman get happy and Shagun angry. Raman want to dance and Ishu refused and tell her condition that Ishu will not dance with Raman so that she will dance with Romi. Raman get shattered and Romi get shock, Mihir and Simmi get confused and Shagun wickly smile.
Romi and Ishu dance and Raman sadly watch Ishu dance with Romi. When the practice is over Raman want to talk to Ishu but Shagun pull Raman then Ishu left hall fast without waiting. Raman push Shagun and run after Ishu.
Superb twist…waiting to next part
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kumud dear thanks guru dear thanks
dear parichary thanks for ur ideas loved this story but dear mine is bit different pl let me know ur opinion abt it
jasmine dear sorry wasnt well due to rains so was not posting thanks alot
janani thanks dear
lisa dear thanks yes willnot separate them iam also ishra fan