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How r u guys doing????
Rushi here friends I missed u all alot so am back with new series
Dil toh pagal hain
This ff is adapted from 1997’s Bollywood epic movie Dil toh pagal hain, I will add some spices n twist to the story.
This will be a romantic Ishra ff.
So today I will present a small promo
please let me know ur opinion of this ff
so here we goooooooooooooooooooo
A young boy is sleeping in some hall
He is dressed in denims n yellow t-shirt
Another boy throws water on him
Boy in yellow t-shirt wakes up with jerk
yellow t-shirt boy(still half sleepy)-Romi, what the hell is ur problem, I was about to hold
Dance Champion’s trophy Remo sir was giving it to me
n u idiot u woke me up that too by throwing water
u have actually spilled water on my dreams
Romi-ohhhhhhhhhhh Mr Raman Bhalla to make dreams turn to reality we need to work hard by just sleeping n dreaming nothing happens
Dance Championship is just 2 months away n we haven’t even started with practice
(so friends Another boy was Romi that is Aly Goni n the boy who was sleeping is Raman that is our Karan patel in this ff Raman n Romi aren’t brothers but are good friends)
Raman yawns
Raman-Romi relax everything will happen, I cannot let my dream break our troupe will win yes we will win dance championship
btw where is shagun
we need to start from today
Romi (irritated)-she might be busy with make up these girls I say are most most most
A beautiful lady dressed in pink long skirt n black top interrupts romi
Lady-are most hardworking n smart n intelligent n
Romi interrupts
Romi-ohhh just shut up shagun u are never on time I just dnt know what Raman saw in u that he made u part of this troupe
(Friends that young lady is our shagun )
An angry shagun holds romi’s collar
Raman comes in between n tries to stops shagun he holds her hands they have eye contact n shagun is lost in his eyes
Dil toh pagal hain dil deewana hain plays in bg
Scene 2
A southindian couple is shown
Man is reading newspaper
Lady is cutting vegetables
A gorgeous girl dressed in orange anarkali brings coffee
Girl-Aunty, uncle good morning wali good good hot hot coffee
Lady-Thank u ishu beta
man-Ishita beta u make best coffee in world
Girl-I have to make best coffee after all aunty has taught me
Girl hugs lady
Girl-I should wake up mihika orelse she will get late to college
Girl leaves
Lady-vishwa, my all responsibilities are taken up by Ishita so nicely, she is perfect sister to mihika
Man-yes madhvi u are right but I dnt know y god has been so
unfair to her, she was just five when he took away her parents
Lady-Because god wanted her to stay with us he wanted us to have privilege to adopt her n take care of her
(Friends that couple is Amma n Appa from original but in this ff they aren’t real parents of Ishita they have adopted Ishita n brought her up as Ishita had lost her parents in car accident when she was 5 years old
mihika is real daughter of Amma appa for this ff)
So did u all like it??
Any suggestions
I will eagerly wait for ur comments
Thank u
21 Comments
Nice one rushi…..dil to pagal hai is one of my favourite movies……I love sharukh and madhuri chemistry in it…..n songs of the movie are awesome………am expecting that u will include new scenes between ishra……waiting for next one……n yeah even I were missing you……
Thanks lekha will try to make it unique
Nice start but make couple of Ishra not Raman with that ugly shagun plz ??
Thanks payal I hope not to disappoint
Happy that you are back Rushi… Wowwww I m waiting
Thanks nivedha dear
Nice start…waiting for ff eagerly
thanks ipsita
Awesome dear…Loved the intro
Hi…..Missed u Rushi!!!…….wonderful start……….loved it…….waiting eagerly for next updates………..
Thanks dear
Pls continue
yes I will thanks please keep reading 🙂
I think karishma’s character is done by shagun and madhuri’s by ishita and srk raman and akshay’s probably by mani
Anu dear please keep reading u will come to know shortly
nice intro……. continue it…………..
thanks dear please keep reading 🙂
thanks dear
Wonderful starting but I did not see the movie (dil toh pagal hain)..but this is very different story line ..
Hii guru,
was missing ur comments alot
thanks no problems if u have nt watched the movie
I will ensure that I write everything clearly 🙂
please kp reading 🙂
Yes friend rushi, I’m big fan of divyanka and karan also your ff…today I read your undying love story that is fabulous finished… I’m not able to read your story early because my exams…