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Recap: sanskaar’s romantic date for ragini…..
Sanskaar and Ragini are going somewhere in the black Audi! Their hands are intervened with each other and Ragini’s head is on her shoulder…. And his one arm is around her shoulders!!!
Ragini: sans… Where are we going??
Sanskaar: just few more minutes…..
Ragini smiles. Sanskaar kisses her forehead and rests his head on her head. Soon their car stops in front of a place. Sanskaar gets down and opens the door for her. She smiles and steps out and is shocked / surprised)/ happy to see the same ” Smile Orphanage ” ( hope u remember it’s the same orphanage from where this story started ) …. She looks at sanskaar who’s already smiling at her.
Ragini: u know sans….. I love you soo much!!!
Sanskaar nods and signs her to move forward!!! She compiles and moves in. The garden where she used to sing and play guitar was beautifully decorated and all her pictures where she was playing and dancing with the children were presented so gracefully!!
Ragini’s eyes welled up. She looked at sanskaar who talked her through sign language.
Sanskaar: raginii I know this is a very special place for you and you consider these children as ur family…… So I hv taken their permission also to make u as my wife….
Ragini smiles hearing this… She holds his hands and squeeze it. She didn’t have words to express her feelings. …. She side hugged him as they move inside the orphanage to meet everyone!
Everyone hooted and clapped as the couple entered the main hall. Ragini blushed as sanskaar smiled. Everyone congratulated the couple ? and gave them their best wishes and blessings. Sanskaar told everything to ragini through actions. Later they cut a big heart shaped strawberry cake and fed each other. Later the couple danced on Tere Sang Yaara on everyones insistence!!!!!!!
After spending an hour with them Ragini and sanskaar moved from there after waving them bye!!!!
They again sat in the car and moved towards her another favourite place, the Rosy Garden…… Ragini jumped in happiness as she saw the parks after almost 10 months…. She hugged sanskaar and moved in. Sanskaar made her sit on the swing and pushed her from behind. She giggled in happiness. Both were enjoying like kids. They played on different rides for another half an hour and left from there after having the coconut water.
Ragini: u know sans….. I never thought that after my accident I would lead a normal life….. But u made it possible sans….. Thank u so much sans….
She kept her head on his shoulder as they moved along the park. Sanskaar side hugged her and kept his head on her head… He held her hand and made her face him.
Sanskaar: raginii….. I should thank you for coming in my life and making it beautiful…… I’m so lucky that I got u in my life and now u r my life……
Ragini smiles.
Ragini: sans….. Promise me that you’ll never leave me…. N u’ll always stay by my side………
Sanskaar: of course raginii….. There’s no question of leaving u….. If I’m ur sans ( breath ) Then u r also my heartbeat ( dhadkan ) Then how can I live without my dhadkan.. Haan????
Ragini hugs him tightly as he enacted those words. She understood him more than himself. It was evident from their eyes that how much they love each other…..
Music starts playing in bg…….
La La La La La La Lala La La La La
Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Tere Naam
La La La
Tere Naam
La La La La
Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Pyaar Bahut Karte Hai Tumse Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam
Ho Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam
(( sanskaar holds her hand and twirled her as he heard the song playing in the radio….. He lipsed the song and came close to her………. Ragini blushed and turned her head………))
La La La La La La Lala La La La La
La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La
(( ragini twirled pulling out her hands and looking up while sanskaar stared at her lovingly…….))
Tere Ishq Ne Saathiya Tera Haal Kya Kardiya
Tere Ishq Ne Saathiya Tera Haal Kya Kardiya
(( They come near few children who were playing in the park and give them chocolates….. Ragini plays with them….. Later the children revolves around them and hoots……… They click pics……))
Gulshan Bhi To Ab Veerana Lagta Hai
Har Aapna Hum Ko Begana Lagta Hai
Hum Teri Yaadon Mein Khoye Rehte Hai
Log Hume Pagal Deewana Kehte Hai
Tere Bina Tere Bina
Tere Bina Naamumkin Hai Zindagi Ka Guzara Sanam
Ho Zindagi Ka Guzara Sanam
(( while ragini sits on the bench enjoying her ice candy, Sanskaar adores her and tucks her hair behind her ear which was disturbing his beautiful view…… He’s lost in her while she’s lost in her candy……… ?))
Lagi Chote Na Lagi Chote Na Lagi Chote Na
Ishq Ka Dhaga Tote Na
Lagi Chote Na Lagi Chote Na Lagi Chote Na
Ishq Ka Dhaga Tote Na
Tere Ishq Ne Saathiya Tera Haal Kya Kardiya
Tere Ishq Ne Saathiya Tera Haal Kya Kardiya
(( Ragini again sits on the swing while sanskaar pushes her from behind….. She laughs…… Both enjoy each other’s company………))
Naino Se Behte Ashqo Ke Dharo Mein
Humne Tujhko Dekha Chand Sitaro Mein
Virhaki Agni Mein Pal Pal Tapti Hai
Ab To Sasein Teri Mala Japti Hai
Tere Liye Tere Liye
Tere Liye Is Duniya Ka Har Sitam Hai Gawara Sanam
Ho Har Sitam Hai Gawara Sanam
Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Tere Naam Tere Naam Tere Naam
(( They both sat in the car and drove away from there waving bye to the children….. Sanskaar’s eyes welled up as he thinks that how lucky he’s that he got a girl like Ragini…… She looks at him and wipes his tears and nods no….. She knew wht he was thinking…….. She hugs him……..))
Sanskaar: ragini… Did u forgave me now???
Ragini: forgave… Why??
Sanskaar: arre that…..
Ragini ( smiles ): oh common sans….. I forgave u long back…. So just chill…..
She pulls his cheeks as he pouts…..
Ragini: u r soo cute my sans…..
Sanskaar blushes………… Ragini smiles………
Now it was time for the finale…. That is to meet their parents and telling them abt their love!! Ragini was very nervous but sanskaar consoled her though he was also nervous and scared but he had faith on god and their love!!!!
They both held each other’s hand and moved out of the car as they came outside the badi. They knew both the families would be there. They took a deep breath and moved inside and knocked the door. They had held their hands, this no one could tell as Ragini’s pallu was covering their hands. Shomi opened the door and was surprised to see both of them together that to dressed up in the saree and suit. She smiled and welcomes them in.
They both entered and stood there still holding there hands which was not visible.
Shomi ( she typed in the phone and gave her ) : arre ragu… Y hv u worn this saree and wht were u doing with sanskaar???
Ragini: voh maa… I had gone to orphanage with sanskaar as u were not there….
Shomi: oh okay…. U r looking really pretty in this saree…. Have u brought it from Delhi???
Ragini looks at sanskaar and then again at shomi.
Ragini: no ma. Actually…..
Shekhar: arre bhai let them sit first…
Shomi nodded and both of them sat down now leaving their hands.
They were sitting opposite to each other. Shomi sat beside ragini and kept her hands on her shoulders. Ragini and sanskaar were confused.
Shomi ( to sanskaar ): beta now whtever i’ll say u pls to tell to her by sign language….
Sanskaar nodded. Ragini moved her eyebrows to ask him wht happened?? Sanskaar blinked his eyes and signed that he’ll tell.
Shomi: beta tell her that now her wait is over……
Sanskaar does the action for same.
Ragini: wait for wht maa???
Shomi: we found ur prince charming for whom u were looking….
Sanskaar froze at his place. His heart skipped a beat. He wanted to shout and tell that he’s her prince charming but came out of his thoughts as ap shook him. His eyes became moist. Ragini got tensed.
Shomi: beta tell her na….
Sanskaar nodded and explained the same to her. Tears started forming in her eyes. Both had a painful eye lock…
Shomi: also tell her that he’ll be coming to see her tomorrow…..
Sanskaar does the action for the same. Ragini felt the earth slipping away beneath her legs.
Shomi: and he doesn’t hv any problem… He’ll accept u as u are…. ..
Sanskaar again did the action. Ragini’s heart pain seeing him expressionless and numb.
Shomi: So be ready tomorrow morning at 11 am…. They’ll come tomorrow to fix the marriage.
Sanskaar again did action helplessly… He was trying hard to control his tears. Ragini could feel his pain. she was abt to stand but shomi made her sit by holding her wrist.
Shomi: arre there is one more good news….
Sanskaar again did the action. Both were heartbroken and wanted to run away from there.
Ap: sanskaar bete… Even ur marriage is fixed with my friend’s daughter. They’ll also come to see you tomorrow……
Sanskaar looked at her shocked. He didn’t knew how to react. He looked at ragini who asked him wht happened??
He again did action that his marriage is also fixed. Now that was it for Ragini…. She couldn’t take it anymore. Sanskaar looked at her helplessly and signed her to say something. Ragini looked at shomi and shekhar who were looking very happy.. And that happiness could be seen in their eyes. She kept her hand on her mouth to control her cry and ran away from there. Sanskaar got worried and ran behind her.
He saw her going downstairs, Sanskaar went from the other side to stop her from going. He ran downstairs to reach her before she leaves the house.
Ragini was running while crying… She was running downstairs when her feet got entangling with her pallu and she fell down the stairs, rolling…. …… Her head got banged with the wooden chest of drawers kept there and the vases kept on it fell on her head making it bleed sooo much…. .
Sanskaar who was running down the stairs saw this shouted with his whole power, strength which he had…
” RAGINIIIIIII ” HE SHOUTED….. The blood oozed out of his mouth as the nerves broke down in his throat……
As he was running very fastly he missed one step and rolled over the stairs….. And finally his head got banged with the pillar…..
Ragini saw this shouted ” SANSKAARRRRRR “…..
All the family members came out hearing their shouts and were shocked to see that both ragini and sanskaar were lying in the pool of blood in the centre of the compound…… They were trying to reach other……
Sad music plays in the bg…. As the family rushes down. Laksh calls the ambulance.
Ragini pulls out her hand to reach him. Sanskaar cries. Their heads were bleeding.
Sanskaar: ragini…..
Ragini was happy. Super happy that she finally heard her name from his mouth. Yes she heard it…… But it was too late…… Too late for them……
Sanskaar: ragini…. Y did u…….
Ragini: sans….. How can I……. I……..
Sanskaar tried coming closer to her……..
Music continued to play…….
” RAGINIIIIIII…….. SANSKAARRRRRRR ” shouted the family. Everyone else gathered there.
Ragini tried to reach him but he was very far. She pulled out her hand to hold him. Sanskaar did the same.
Ragini: I…… I…. ।……. Love…………. I……. L…. Love…… You…….. Sans…….. I…….
Sanskaar cried listening this.
Sanskaar: I…… Love…….. Love…… You too………. Rag……. Raginii……
He cried as the blood came out from his mouth. Ragini too cried seeing him. Sanskaar moved forward. ….
(( Marke bhi na vaada apna todenge
Ek duje ka saath kabhi na chhodenge ))
All their beautiful memories together played in their minds as the tears rolled down their cheeks with blood…..
(( Apna to sadiyon janmon ka naata hai
Jaan se jaan ko kaun juda kar paata hai ))
Their first meet, their lunch, their friendship. His proposal, her acceptance , his fun talks, her blush, their first kiss, the romantic night, their support for each other…………
(( Tere siva, tere siva
Tere siva is dariya ka nahin koi kinaara sanam
Ho, nahin koi kinaara sanam ))
…………… Their fights, their separtion, their pain, their punar milan. Their kiss, their dance, their eye locks…………
(( Tere naam humne kiya hai jeevan apna saara sanam
Ho, jeevan apna saara sanam ))
Everything played in their mind until they closed their eyes, smiling as they finally touched each other’s hand………………
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First of all Thank you everyone for your beautiful comments on the last shot…. I’m so sorry I couldn’t reply to you all one by one… But I had read ur comments and felt extremely happy that u all liked it!! So thank you so much!!!! ??????????
Now coming to this update I know it was short, shocking and emotional……….. It was the demand of the story!!!!!!! So pls do tell me how was it and did you liked the twist ? or not.!!!!! I’ll be waiting for your comments!!!!! ???? till then take care and keep smiling always!!! ???????
Keep reading ?
With Love
Richa
89 Comments
Omggg?????? such a marvellous update…..started sooo fabulously n ended with such a huge shock …oh gawd!!!!! M stilll numb…..??????? Ragsan????????? oh gawd!!!jst can’t imagine dere situation yaar…..ye kya kar deya richu?????? ….plz plz plzzzzzzzz sb thk kar de fatafat pl,,,z……waitng eagerly for nxt part..
U know richu d best thing about ur ffs are d way u write it..it’s full of emotions n I always gets engrossed in ur ffs ..it all feels so real….N dats d sign of a TRUE WRITER…n ofcourse U r a “true writer”….d way u write dere scene…so creative….in such a small age u r sooooo talented.. u r god gifted baccha litterelyy????
Keep going like dis….keep rockng n stay blesed ???love u so so so sooo muchh??????tc ???
Fairyyyyyyyyyyyy diiiiiiiiii I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! ????????????
Thaaaaaankkkkk youuuuuuuuu soooooooooooo much didu……. I don’t hv words to reply back to you!!!!!! ? ? ?
It’s all bcoz of u guys that u support me and encourage me to write more………. I’m lucky that I got u guys…….
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Love you loads!!!!! ????❤?????
Awesome dear. In the beginning it was like a fairy tale story and ended with mystery, thriller. I am really happy that now they can speak and hear, eventhough they didn’t need it, I am happy. I know you won’t seperate them. Update next part soon dear.
Bye dear. Take care.
Thank you so much makku dear!!!!! ? ? I’m glad you liked it… .. I’ll post soon!!! Take care!!! ? ?
Plzzz don’t separate ragsan
They’ll be United one day vk…… If written in their destiny……. Keep reading… .
awesome
Thank you ammy!!! ?
Sooo emotional chap yaar….. Pls don’t do this with them…. Feeling so sad…… N ur cover pic… Its just awesome…. Tere naam…. I just loved it… Keep going taar….
Thank you so much tina!!!! ? ? ?
Awesome update
Thank you love!!! ?
Awesome Superb Fantastic Fabulous Mind Blowing Amazing Emotional
Loved it to the core
Ragsan were damn to the core
Description was fab???
U rocked it again
Waiting for the next one………………..
Thaaaaaankkkkk youuuuuuuuu soooooooooooo much akka!!!! ? ? ? ? ? ?
U r always welcome Dear ??
superb. …. updatesoon dear. . i hope nothing happened tothem. … u nailed it dear. ..seriously….hats off to yo!!!!
Thank you so much Khushi!!! ? ? ?
bechare. ….. richa yaar tune toh dil hi jeet liya hume rula kar. … kya update tha. .. just now i read it and im still in tears. … aisa kaise kar sakti ho tum inke sath n hamare sath. . sigh now pls jaldi se update kar do abb. ..
I’m so sorry to make u cry dear……. I couldn’t help it……. .. But thank you so much shikha!!!! ? ? I’ll post soon…..
Awesome update dear, make them fine soon
Thank you rehna!!!! ? they’ll be fine soon….
Awesome dear.
Thank you hema dear!!! ? ?