YOU’VE COMPLETED ME… RAGSAN! FEW SHOTS…. SHOT 23

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Recap: ragini is out of coma….

Ragini comes to baadi and enters her room and locks the door and lies on the bed crying. She’s crying miserably amd uncontrollably.

Ragini: y god y??? Y u always snatch my happiness???? If u don’t want to make sanskaar fine then pls kill me also coz I can’t live without him… I can’t…. Pls make him fine or call me to you…. Otherwise I’ll kill myself…… Pls god please……

She’s crying like anything….. There in MM everyone realises that ragini is not there…. Everyone rush out. Children ? and laksh are told to stay with sanskaar. Rest of them run to baadi……

The door of the room knocks. Ragini looks on… She cries….

Shomi: beta open the door…..

Shekhar: ragu open the door beta….

Swara: ragu pls…..

Ragini: no… Leave me alone…..

Ap: beta pls open the door… U cant loose hope….

Dp: beta u hv to be strong….

Ragini: I can’t uncle I can’t be strong….. Sanskaar is my strength…. I can’t live without him…..

Ap: Then bring him back na beta… …

Ragini looks on teary eyed.

Dp: haan beta only u can bring him back….

Shekhar: beta tum haar nhi maan sakti…..

Shomi: u hv to fight for it beta….

Swara: u can do it ragu….

Ap: pls come out beta and bring my son back….

Everyone: ragini….. Ragini. … Open the door beta. ……….

But there is no response from inside. All get worried and knocks the door repeatedly……. After almost half an hour the door opens. All are look at the opening shocked!

Swara: ragu??

Ragini is standing there wearing the same white and blue dress which sanskaar has selected for her with thigh high boots ? …. In one hand she has her guitar ? and other hand is has chocolates…. She’s looking beautiful with her hair open in loose curls….. She has done light make up to hide her teary n swelled face……

Ap: beta whts this???

Ragini: u know aunty… When I asked sanskaar wht shall I do when u r not around but I need u,,!!!! He told me to sing a song from heart and he’ll be there…..

Everyone looks on…..

Ragini: today I’ll try for the last time to bring him back coz I can’t see him like that everyday…… N if he gets up we’ll eat these chocolates ( she showed two chocs ) and if he didn’t then…..

Shomi: Then????

Ragini ( taking a deep breath ): Then I’ll eat this chocolate ( she showed a single different choc )

Dp: whts this choc???

Ragini: it has poison which I hv nixed…..

All: wht?????

Shekhar tries to take the chocolate from her but she stands still keeping her fist closed.

Shekhar: beta y r u being so negative!?? Sanskaar will come back….

Ragini: I know papa he has to come back today only otherwise he’ll lose me….. ( pause ) Forever…..

Everyone are shocked.

Swara: u can’t do this ragu….

Ragini: I can do anything di…… Anything…..

And saying so she moves out…… Everyone follows her.

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Ragini comes inside MM and looks at sanskaar’s room…. She has tears in her eye which she swiftly wipes away…

Ragini ( monologue ): aaj hum dono ke pyaar ka imtihaan hai sanskaar. ….. Today we both hv to prove our love….. If my love for you is true then I’ll get u back today and if ur love is true for me then u’ll get up hearing my song and will hug me tightly……. This is the last chance for me to save my sans….. N i’ll sing from heart just for you…. N u hv to promise that u’ll take me in ur embrace and take away all my worries and give mee the happiness of being with u…… Forever!!!!!!!!

All are worried for her. Laksh and children come there. Children hugs ragini…. They cry.

Ragini: y r u crying???

Sahil: di v tried our best but jiju is so stubborn he’s not getting up…..

Ishana: I even told him tha u r very sad but……

Ragini ( teary eyed ): don’t worry bachas…. Today either u’ll get both ur di n jiju or u’ll lose ur di forever….. But don’t worry I hv faith in my love nad god that he’ll not break my trust……..

Om: di jiju will come back but u hv to promise that u’ll never leave us…..

Aman: yes di…. V can’t afford to lose u…..

Ragini: beta if u don’t want to lose me then just pray to god to make sanskaar fine….. God listens to Children only so he’ll definitely listen to ur prayers han….

She pats their cheeks and moves towards sanskaar’s room. The children are crying while the elders are watching everything helplessly……..

Ragini stands outside his room….. Tears are continuously flowing from her eyes….. She recalls are the moments spent with him… ……

Ragini: i’ll not look at u sans unless u come out amd make me look at u…….. U promised me na sans that u’ll never leave me alone… Then u hv to prove that u can keep ur promises……….

She touches the door of the room and keeps her forehead on the door…. Others are watching her from a bit far……… Everyone’s eyes are moist. All are scared and are praying to god to make sanskaar fine………..

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[[[[[[[ guys just listen to the song while reading this….. Even translation is there for the one’s who don’t know hindi……. Its a request baaki ur choice…… .. Its a very emotional song… U’ll also feel the pain once u hear the song……. Its the title song of Tere Naam ( 2003 ) sung by Alka Yagnik…… ]]]]]]]

Ragini is sitting on the ground with support of the wall with her guitar in her hands…… All are standing at a distance seeing her helplessly……….

{{ she strikes the cords of the guitar and starts singing…… }}

La la la … la la la … la la la La la la … la la la … la la la

{{ with lots of pain, love, happiness, anxiety… She starts the lines of the song…. }}

Tere naam humne kiya hai

{{ she tilts her head a bit saying the line….. }}

Jeevan apna sara sanam

Ho jeevan apna sara sanam

{{ remembering sanskaar.. She comes in form and while striking the cords of the guitar she sings beautifully ………}}

Tere naam … tere naam

Tere naam humne kiya hai

Jeevan apna sara sanam

Ho jeevan apna sara sanam

{{{ she looks at the chocolates while singing the lines and thinks she’ll die if he doesn’t get up….. }}

Pyar bahut karte hai tumse

Ishq hai tu humara sanam

Ho ishq hai tu humara sanam

{{{ for the above lines she rests her head on the wall and closes her eyes still striking the correct cord of her guitar……. }}

La la la … la la la … la la la La la la … la la la … la la la
La la la … la la la … la la la La la la … la la la … la la la

Tere ishq ne saathiya

Tera haal kya kar diya

Tere ishq ne saathiya

Tera haal kya kar diya

{{{ everyone else looks on teary eyed and goes in flashback where both the children were happy like anything and now there are only tears in their eyes…….. }}}

Neendon mein, aankhon mein, pyaase khwaabon mein

{{ she gets up and moves away form the wall of the room and stands supported by the railings……. She recalls all her dreams which she seen with him….. As the tears rolled down her cheeks…….. }}}

Tu hi tu hai yaara mehki saanson mein

{{ she cries as the flashback of she calling him as her breath and he calling her as his heartbeat……. }}}

Har bechaini reh rehke yeh kehti hai

{{ she recalls how his absence made her anxious and sad…… }}

Har dhadkan mein teri chahat rehti hai

{{ she sings while crying and thinking how her every heartbeat yearns for him and wants him beside him…… }}}

Tere bina, tere bina Without you, without you
Tere bina namumkin hai

{{ she looks back at the room and tilts her head…… }}

Zindagi ka guzara sanam

Ho zindagi ka guzara sanam

{{{ she touches the wall and nods no thinking she can’t live without him….. She slides down and sits on the floor hugging her guitar…… }}}

Lagi chote na lagi chote na lagi chote na

{{ ap moves ahead towards her…… }}

Ishq ka dhaaga toote na

{{ shomi and swara are broken thinking abt ragini…… }}

Lagi chote na lagi chote na lagi chote na

Ishq ka dhaaga toote na

Tere ishq ne saathiya

{{ the kids look at their di with pearls ( tears ) in their eyes……. }}}

Tera haal kya kar diya

{{ ragini is sitting like a statue….. }}

Tere ishq ne saathiya

Tera haal kya kar diya

{{{ everyone looks on teary eyed as the men supports their respective wives and friends ( kids ) …… }}}

Doori hai, majboori hai, tanhai hai

{{ she gains strength and resumes singing and their fights and distance flashes in her mind making her cry….. }}}

Teri yaad hum mein kis modh pe layi hai

{{{ she looks towards the door singing the song and then closes her eyes…… }}

Apni toh manzil hai teri raahon mein

{{{ she recalls sitting in sanskaar’s embrace for hours in Kolkata and enjoying the view……….. She always wanted to walk with him to reach his destination…… Coz his destination was now hers…. … }}}}

Jeena marna hai ab teri bahon mein

{{{{{ THEIR LAST MOMENTS TOGETHER FLASHED IN HER MIND MAKING HER NUMB FOR A MOMENT…… }}}}

Tere liye, tere liye

{{ she looks up and sings playing the guitar….. }}}

Tere liye is duniya ka

Har sitam hai gawara sanam

Ho har sitam hai gawara sanam

{{{{{ she could bear anything for her breath, her sans…… And is still ready to die for his life…….. He was her everything………. The tears flow from her eyes as she recalls her moments with him……….. }}}}}

Tere naam humne kiya hai

Jeevan apna sara sanam

Ho jeevan apna sara sanam

Tere naam … tere naam

{{{{{{ the song was abt to finish everyone’s
Heartbeat increased especially of ragini…… She was scared….. She was even excited that may be he’ll come to her…… She was anxious….. She was confused……. She was everything……………. But She still sung with all her might and heart……….. She prayed to god in heart to not take sanskaar away from her…………. She wanted to spend her life with him…. Grow old with him…….. She needed him….. To Complete her…….. She needed him like a person needs air to breathe…….. She has written her life on his name….. Now he was the owner of her life……. But still if he didn’t got uo she knew wht to do……………. }}}}}}}

Ragini: TEREEEEE NAAAAMMM!!!!

{{{ she closed her eyes as she sung the last words of the song………… Her heartbeat stopped for a second…….. }}}}}}

The song was over but her eyes were still closed…… Everyone looked at her with tears……. Everyone wanted to hug her right there but they stopped coz they knew that only sanskaar can get her back…… And she can get him back……. Such a tragedy… Such a game God was playing with these innocent souls…………. This was the irony in their story….

There was sadness, excitement, anxiety, curiosity and hope in the atmosphere of MM…….. Everyone waited for sanskaar to come out and take his Raginiii in his embrace……. Ragini was sitting with her head bowed… On her knees with tears flowing down her cheeks………….

The episode ends with ragini sitting on the floor……

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Okayy so this was it for today…. ik many of u mgt hv guessed it…. n i really hope i didn’t bored u all…. hoping for a good response from ur side!!! would love to hear it from u guys!!!!

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