Hello frnds…I m Muniya. For the first time, I hv come up with a YuvAni Os. Hope u all will like it.
YuvAni Os
*Destiny*
At night
Suhani is sitting on the bench in the yard, near the fountain. Her silky locks r gently waving in breeze. She is looking beautiful due to angelic moonlight. But, the sadness, that is prevailing in her eyes, ruining her beauty.
Suhani is thinking about the whole day’s incidents. Suhani did a silly mistake while preparing for morning aarti and Dadi took it as a huge chance in her part to insult and scold Suhani, for the whole day. She is such an expert in creating scenes from tiny matters that Suhani became helpless. Pratima and Yuvraaj tried to confront Dadi in Suhani’s defense but in vain. Suhani tried her best to please her but with no result as she is not at all ready to listen to anyone. Suhani was so hurt and became numb.
Actually, not only today, now it has become everyday story of her life. Dadi and her gang, that r obviously Rags and Menka, they r always bound to make her leave the house, at any cost. They just can’t understand the fact that how can Yuvraaj Birla love a girl like Suhani. They just can’t accept the truth.
Yes, Yuvraaj loves Suhani and he has confessed his love to her. Initially, Suhani took his confession as a dream that has come true. But when she realized it was real and not a dream, she reached the cloud nine. That became the happiest day of her life. The emptiness of her life was filled with love.
Suhani and Yuvraaj started their new life of love. But the way of their love-life is never smooth, not even a single step.
Dadi was always there to make the hell of their life with all her planning and plotting. Although everyone of the family knows how much Dadi dislikes Suhani for her dark complexion, but nowadays things r getting worse. It seems as if she can’t even withstand Suhani’s presence near her. Actually, Dadi thinks she has been defeated by Suhani as she has win Yuvraaj’s heart along with his love and it has only increased the level of her hatred for Suhani. It hurts Suhani a lot.
Suhani desperately searches for a way to win Dadi’s heart, forever. But, it seems to be the most difficult task. However, Suhani knows that there is only one way to make Dadi happy and that is to fulfill her wish by getting apart from Yuvraaj. But Suhani can’t even think of that. That thought only sends her one step ahead near death. That’s why she is trying hard for another way.
Suhani was thinking all these, when Yuvraaj, who was staring at her from afar for few minutes, slowly makes his way towards her. He comes and sits beside her. Suhani looks at him. Yuvraaj smiles and holds her hand.
Yuvraaj: Kya hua Suhani?
Suhani looks away and tries to smile.
Suhani: Kuch bhi toh nahi..
She again smiles. Yuvraaj leaves her hand to cup her face to make her beautiful eyes meet with his.
Yuvraaj: U know what…I thought u r a superwoman…who can do everything…but I was wrong.
Suhani’s eyebrows furrowed in confusion as Yuvraaj tilts his head in fake hopeless manner.
Suhani: What do u mean?..what’s the thing that I can’t do?
Yuvraaj admires the cuteness of her confused face for sometime and smiles. He brings her face closer.
Yuvraaj: That…u just can’t lie to me.
Suhani understands what Yuvraaj meant and looks away.
Suhani: What r u saying Yuvraaj? I m not lying to u…Sach mein kuch bhi nahi hua.
Yuvraaj again turns her face to make her look at him.
Yuvraaj: Really?…than why r u looking away?..Look at my eyes and say.
Suhani frees herself and goes to stand afar. Yuvraaj also goes to stand by her side.
Yuvraaj: If u don’t want to share with me..than its ok…but plz…jhoot mat bolo.
Suhani turns to him and suddenly hugs him tight.
Yuvraaj: Suhani..
Suhani: I m sorry Yuvraaj…I didn’t want to hurt u…sorry.
Yuvraaj hugs her back and strokes her head.
Yuvraaj: I m not hurt Suhani…I just want u to feel free with me…don’t u understand…how much it hurts me when I look at ur sad face?
Suhani breaks the hug and Yuvraaj makes her sit again.
Yuvraaj: Now tell me what happened?
Suhani keeps silent for sometime.
Suhani: Yuvraaj…Tum jaante ho na…Dadi…Dadi..wo mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi karti…wo nahi chahti ki main tumhare saath rahun…unhe lagta hai…
Yuvraaj was already annoyed with Dadi for the morning incident and now when Suhani again says about her, Yuvraaj loses his cool. His face turned a bit angry as he cuts her off
Yuvraaj: I know ki unhe kya lagta hai…and that’s entirely her problem…not mine…
Suhani was shocked due to his sudden outburst. Yuvraaj understands that and soon his eyes get soften as he glances over Suhani’s face. He holds her hands and lightly presses them in between his palms. Suhani looks at him innocently.
Yuvraaj: I m always with u Suhani…no matter what.
Yuvraaj’s soothing voice provides a strong feeling of assurance inside Suhani. Her lips slightly curves up to the corners. Yuvraaj places his hand on her cheek.
Yuvraaj: I don’t care for anyone Suhani…I only know that I love u…and that’s it…Dadi kuch bhi soche..mujhe usse koi farq nahi parta…
Suhani: Main samajhti hoon Yuvraaj…Dadi tumse bohut pyaar karti hai…shayad isliye wo…
Yuvraaj again cuts her off
Yuvraaj: Haan Suhani.. main jaanta hoon…but if she really loves me…than she has to accept the truth of my life that I love u and I can’t live without u.
Suhani continues to look at him.
Yuvaraaj: Suhani…we r destined to be one…no one can separate us…and as u know very well that even I was not ready to accept this relation…but I had to… ur unconditional love compelled me to love u back…It is all bcz it was our destiny that make us fall in love with eachother…ur love changed me…and my thinkings…and I don’t really mind to change myself for u…it’s as easy as that…aur tumne hi mujhe sikhaya hai ki hum jinse pyaar karte hain unke liye hum kuch bhi kar sakte hain…but if Dadi don’t want to understand that…than there is no way to make her understand…let her do whatever she want…and I believe one day she’ll also understand…and u know…Love can conquer everything…toh bas tum himmat mat harna…bcz I m always with u Suhani…
Each word of Yuvraaj touched Suhani’s heart. She can understand whatever Yuvraaj said is from the depth of his heart. He believes all those what he said. And Suhani believes him. She felt so much relieved and happy that she was in tears.
Suhani: Yuvraaj…tum…
Suhani tries to say something but Yuvraaj gestures her to stop and wipes her tears. Suhani stops and looks at him.
Yuvraaj wraps his hand around Suhani to pull her closer to himself. Suhani smiles a bit and leans her head on his shoulder. They both close their eyes to absorb the warmth of the moment in eachothers arms. Suhani can hear the rhythmic beating of Yuvraaj’s heart, that, she knows, now beats for her. Automatically, her smile gets widened, that only adds charm to her beauty. Yuvraaj smiles as he feels her smile. He tightens his grip around her. Suhani lifts her head to look at him.
Now Suhani was looking to be the most beautiful girl as the sadness, that was covering her beauty, had gone by the assured embrace of her Yuvraaj. She has gain enough strength to fight with the problems of her everyday life.
Yuvraaj smiles at her. They hv a deep eyelock, full of love, trust and assurance. A romantic song fades away as they continue to live their ever ending moment.
Tujhko main rakh loon wahan…Jahan pe kahin hai mera yakeen…Main jo tera na hua…Kisi ka nahi…Kisi ka nahi…Le jaaye jaane kahan hawaayein hawaayein…Le jaaye tujhe kahan hawaayein hawaayein…Begaani hai ye baaghi hawaayein hawaayein…Le jaaye mujhe kahan hawaayein hawaayein…Le jaaye jaane kahan…Na mujhko khabar…Na tujhko pata…
Ooooo…Oooo…Oooo…Oooo…
Banati hai jo tu…wo yaadein jaane sang mere kab tak chale…Inhi mein to meri subha bhi dhale…shaam dhale mousam dhale…Khayalon ka shahar…Tu jaane tere hone se hi abaad hai…Hawaayein haq mein…Wo hi hai aate jaate jo tera naam le…Deti hai jo sadaayein…Hawaayein hawaayein…Na jaane kya batayein…Hawaayein hawaayein…Le jaaye tujhe kahan hawaayein hawaayein…Le jaaye mujhe kahan hawaayein hawaayein…Le jaaye jaane kahan…Na mujhko khabar…Na tujhko pata…
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So guys, that’s it. Hope u ppl like it.
Some of my frnds ( mainly Tejaswi) asked me to write on YuvAni. So, I just tried to fulfill their wish. I know it’s short. Hope they like it. I read all YuvAni ffs of Napsha, Yuvani, Avani, Yuvani-Saraj and those r really good. That’s why I m bit nervous about u guys response towards my story.…Still, I hope for the best.
Awaiting ur precious reviews and plz Feel free to share.
Bye Guys.
Yours Muniya (Moumita)
27 Comments
Plzzz muniya writing some kriyyam os or ff Plzzz.I miss kriyyam so badly
Yea Sabana…I’ll post kriyyam os very soon…
Thanks dear
Superb yuvani conversation usme sab he pyar,trust,emotional sabb…..plz Continuo ur writing.wait kartha hu thumara new yuvani ff keliye
Thank u so much Zahnab dear…
It really means a lot…
Thank you so much dear, for writing on Yuvani, I simply love them……It was wonderful…..simply amazing……..loved Yuvani convo……
Thank u so much Yuvani dear…
Really happy to know that u like it…it means a lot..
Yea…I also love them…Specially I love Rajshri’s smile and her eyes r so beautiful…
Beautiful OS..full of yuvani love..doesn’t seem like u wrote for the first time…plz do write many more stories on yuvani
Thanks Bhargavi…
Glad that u like it…
I wanted to write it as full of Yuvani…
Wow nice and yuvani conversation super…….. Continue u r yuvani ff also.. Plzzzz
Thanks Suvarna…
Firstly thanks a lot muniya sis for considering my request and sparing your valuable time to write a YUVANI os. The way yuvraj made suhani feel good with his words.. Every thing was awesome. The way you wrote was realistic. I could visualise everything in front of my eyes.. Please keep on writing.. Kriyam or Yuvani.. Your os always rocks..
Thank u so much Tejaswi dear….i m really really happy to know that u liked it…
It really means a lot to me…
I’ll soon post kriyyam story…
Thanks a lot…
awesome OS….keep writing on yuvani….
Thank u Yuvani-Saraj…
Really glad that u like it…
Plz plz plz plz write Kriyyam os plz plz plz continue it ur os r awesome awesome plz post Kriyyam os plz
Yes dear…I’ll soon post Kriyyam os
Thanks..
Tat was excellent yuvani os n tysm for tat
Thank u so much Abi…
Hi dear sorry i didnt comment ur ff yesterday.its veryyyyyyy lovely.each and every word said by yuvi was just awesome.this dadi always troubles yuvani.but unlike serial here yuvi is supporting suhani very well from d begining.its superrrrrrrrr sis.i miss yuvani very much actually.ur ff remembers me of those sweet yuvani moments.entire ff is very heart touching.belated happy friendshipday dears and happy rakshabandhan also.enjoy and keep smiling.
Thank u so much Radha…
Glad that u like it….
Yea i also miss them…
Happy frndship day and rakhi to u too dear…
Hi… Muniya…I thought I commented already ..But it didn’t published…??
Anyway… Yuvani OS it’s something different from Kriyam… It’s mature..But yet cute…. Nice convo…. Your writing is soothing flawless…. Please come up with OS of Kriyam too..
Hi Fidato…first of all thank u very much for commenting on my YuvAni ff too…it really means a lot…and made my day…
Happy Friendship Day and Happy Rakshabandhan to u dear…
Next Kriyyam os is almost done
Happy friendship day…And happy Rakshabandhan too… Dear… Waiting for OS…
Osm yuvani os. Yuvani conversation n song part were nice.
Thank u so much Sarita
wow u write yuvani os.. thank u for this.. its superb..ur writing skill is awesome.. keep writing..
Thanks Anshi dear…glad that u like it…