Hey guys…this is japnaaz here….im a new member in tellyupdates family…after seeing so many fanfiction im also thinking to write a story…as im a big fan of three couples namely ADNI, SWASAN and SHIVIKA..so my story will go around only these three..Now kindly leave your opinion in comment box after reading this…so lets start with the Characters intro:
ADVAY SINGH RAIZADA…played by barun sobti..age 28…he is shivaay’s and swara’s massi son living with his nani and cousins after his parents death..he is a maths professor in a college…he is a strict professor but very disciplined..he loves his nani,brother nd sister very much.
SWARA SINGH RAIZADA….played by helly shah..age 23…she is a younger sister of shivaay..she is a MSc maths student…studying in the same college where advay teaches..but nobody knows that she is advay’s sister as she dont want to get treated differently by students…she is treated as a princess in the house. She is a simple girl who believes in fairytype love..
SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI…played by nakkul Mehta…age 29..he also lives with his nani after his parent death.shivaay is the CEO of KRISHNA ENTERPRISES..he is now top businessman of india..who have achieved success in very short span….but he believes in blood, caste and all …He is very arrogant man.but loves his family very much
KRISHNA DEVI…. played by farida jalal…age 80…Nani of advay, swara and shivaay..she love them very much..after their parents death she gives all love to kids so that they should not miss their parents..She want their grandchild to settle in their lives….She is very kind hearted lady.
SANSKAR MAHESHWARI…played by Varun kapoor..Age 26…he is a middle class man working in KRISHNA ENTERPRISES(shivaay’s company) as a accounts manager…he is a hard working guy…who believes in simple living..Shivaay is too impressed with his work so he promoted sanskar as Senior Accounts manager within 6 months….he is living with his mother..his father died some years ago.
SUJATA MAHESHWARI…played by Sonica…age 48..she is living with his son sanskar after her husband death only sanskar is her sole reason to live…she love her son very much and want a gud girl for sanskar.
CHANDNI VASHISHTH…played by shivani tomar…age 23…she is very naughty girl..studying Msc in same college where advay teaches…she and swara in the same class but chandni doesn’t know that advay is swara’s brother..she is the middle class girl living with her parents .
ANIKA KAPOOR…played by Surbhi Chandna …age 24…She is a funny girl just like chandni as she and chandni were school friends and living in the same society…Anika wants to study more but due to family problems she can’t continue her studies..Right now she is working in KRISHNA ENTERPRISES as shivaay’s PA….she leave no chance to irritate shivaay…but she is a good friend of Sanskar, shares every office gossips with him.sanskar saves her from shivaay scoldings everytime.
Other characters:
INDRANI VASHISHTH..played by Ritu shivpuri..age 45…chandni’s mother…a housemaker…love her family very much
DEV NARAYAN VASHISHTH…played by Tarun anand..age 50…chandni’s father…owner of a small grocery store..
SHAYAM KAPOOR…played by Sachin Tyagi..age 52…Anika’s father…gud friend of Dev (Chandni’s Father)…he is heart patient ….Anika is worried for her father’s health so he always stay at home and left his govt job.
RAJVIR KHANNA (MIKKU)…played by Randeep Malik..age 23..he is in same class of Swara and chandni and their gud friend …A prankster.
Lets start with the story
Scene 1
In shivaay’s cabin in KRISHNA ENTERPRISES
Anika put the pepper spray is shivaay eyes…he start shouting on Anika
Shivaay: hey girl what you have done…cant u see…stupid girl u put pepper spray in my eyes
Anika throws the glass of water in his face to reduce the irritation in shivaay eyes..which was kept in his table…Shivaay glares her
Anika :Sorry Sir…please don’t throw me from this office …i really need this job..
Shivaay calls sanskar in his cabin nd tell him to inform anika regarding her work.as it is the first day of anika in office…anika leaves with sanskar after mumbling sorry to shivaay.
Scene 2
In DAV college
Advay is leaving from staff room for taking Msc first year class..there she dashed with chandni..both fall down with advay above chandni…advay is continuously looking in her eyes without even blinking..
Chandni : hey giant man …just stand up from me…Omg u just crushed me..aaaauuuchh…cant u see and walk..Bulldoser kahi ke( advay comes out from his dreamland and gets up from her..)
Advay (gets angry on her and holds her wrist tightly): What the…..its your mistake …u are coming like a bullet train…mannerless girl….
Advay leaves from there leaving chandni fuming….As chandni don’t know that advay is her new maths teacher.
Scene 3
In classroom
Swara,Chandni and Mikku are siting in the classroom ..when advay enters in classroom ..Chandni gets shocked after seeing him
Chandni: What this bulldozer doing here
Swara gets shocked after listening this…but she keep quite
Mikku: He is our maths professor…he is new in this college
As swara,chandni and Mikku are continuously talking…Advay glares them…so they stop talking
Chandni: ohhhh… now i have to bear this angry man
Swara: What ?
Chandni: He is a rowdy professor…Always get angry
Swara laughs after hearing this for his brother.
Scene 4
In Krishna niwas
Sanskar comes to take file from Krishna Niwas(Shivaay/Swara/Advay house)as shivaay told him to bring that file.
Swara opens the door. Sanskar looks at her.they share a beautiful eyelock which is disturbed by a phone tone on swara’s mobile…as shivaay called swara to give sanskar a file which is been kept in cupboard in shivaay’s room.
Sanskar: Maam I want a file…shivaay sir told u about that..
Swara: U sit here..i will bring that file from bhai’s room…nd plz don’t call me maam
Swara then bring that file and give it to sanskar…sanskar leaves from there…
Swara(Thinks): he is a cute guy but very shy
Scene 5
In nani’s room
Advay shivaay swara and nani are spending time after dinner in nani name
Advay : Shivaay what happens to your eyes …why its so red
Shivaay: Because of my stupid PA..she put pepper spray in my eyes..then after that throw a water glass on my face…bewkuf ladki
All laughs after hearing this
Swara: Advay bhai…u got a new name ..
Advay: what
Swara(laughs): Rowdy professor….
Swara to nani :u know nani… my new friend chandni kept this name for bhai.. lolz
Advay remembers about his encounter with chandni in college..
Nani(laughing): Chiku.. now you should stop your angry man look..
All laughs
So guys ….plz drop your comment if u like this…should i continue this story???feel free to criticize!!!
Thanku
Love japnaaz
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Correction PLEASE….its SWARA SINGH OBEROI in swara intro…kindly ignore grammatical mistakes
SORRY FOR THE MISTAKE
REASON WHY THEY ARE LIVING WITH THEIR NANI —Actually when they were kids they all are going to spend their vacations in shimla ..there shivaay nd advay parents died in road accidents..kids were saved as they were in their nani’s car…after their parents death nani brought them in chandiagrh..nd now they all are living happily..
Sorry As this para skipped in above part..so i add it in commnt box..Please bear my mistakes as it is my first time writing…SORRY PLEASE
Superbb start…. post next soon
thanku dear!!!will try to post soon 🙂
Nice start. Continue to post and don’t stop in middle.
yup will try.. bt have patience as it can take tym as i hv to manage my study also..thanku for ur appreciation
Awesome start.
thankx dear 🙂
Awesome start diiii??? all the best for the future story continue soon tc??????
Awww…thank u Ripu !!! im happy dat i got commnt on my story from very talented writer itself…Thank u very much
Nice starting dr i like it
Thanks dear
OMG di u are such a fantabulous writer. Amazing start di . You should continue it as this is my shivika story. Post next one soon.Your lil sis waiting for this. Lots of love & kisses to u my sweet di.
Aww…thanku my lil sisli…will try to continue soon…love u too darling!!!
Awesome….
Thanks dear
Lovely story base Naaz. All characters are clearly introduced. Interesting start.
Thanks dear for your lovely commnt!!!
Awesome
Thanks dear
nice continue
Thnk u so much dear
Good one
Thanks dear
Loved the intro… and so good to meet another fan of our heavenly pair… continue soon dear
thank u so much dear 🙂
waaaa.. love it.. love it.. love it.. i always imagining Helly join isqbaaz to be the youngest sister of that trio coolest brothers 😀 , i can imagine a pampered naughty sister there.. omg!!! then you give me here..
hahaha…thanks dear,,,bt here she is sisli of advay nd shivaay… for a change….:P
Awesome…funny
thank you 🙂
Awesome start…….
thank u 🙂